black-whitE ;africa, a photo from Nairobi, Central

Photographer's Note

Siyah-Beyaz; Afrika

Kenya / Masai-Mara

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CLODO (45116) 2009-12-16 10:17

hi Nilufer
First of all, welcome on TE
The idea of a double portrait was good, but you took it from your height, and it's not this way you have to take children. In fact, you should be at the same height as their eyes.
Good framing with the main boy in the stong point of the picture (1/3 of the length)
Best regards
CLODO

quillo (11858) 2009-12-17 7:55

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Hola Nilufer ----------->

A good photo in light and contrasts, in
a very interesting image of
the children Masai-mara,
the expression of weariness
with his brother in his back
is hard and she makes us think
about the problems of these peoples.
I think that I should improve
the result with another framing,
in any case ....
congratulations and WELCOME!!!

Un saludo.

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rahulm (175) 2009-12-19 3:05

Hello Nilufer,

Very good picture with perfect contrast. If you shown it in vertical format, it would be great i think.

Thanks,
Rahul

Silvio1953 (221463) 2009-12-19 6:26

Ciao Nilufer, welcome on TE, lovely double portrait with cute models, splendid B&W, I like a lot, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

claudeD (47754) 2009-12-20 8:20

Hello Nilufer,

very interesting portrait shot of these children.Perfect sharpness and b+w is a good choice for this picture.TFS.

With regards from Luxembourg

Jean-Claude