working is our liveing, a photo from Goa, West

::: working is our liveing by jayasen (37)

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Fisher mens trying for there best from the sea for liveing..

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Wandering_Dan (3449) 2008-12-08 22:05

Hi, Jaysen -

Interesting grouping of people here, wearing colorful clothes, and nice use of angles with the fishing nets.

The photo could be brightened, though - easy with post-processing. And while the groups are good, I think it would have been better if you'd stood more to the left, so that the right group would be closer to the center of the frame; as it is now, they are too close to the right edge and make the scene unbalanced. And you also have to watch out for extraneous elements, like the bit of log in the fg.

Good beginning, though. Keep working at it.

Regards,
Dan