Photographer's Note
Thoughts and caresses
Where are flying your thoughts little girl?
Your small friends are playing vivacious just there
But you seem absent, absorbed in your thoughts:
small hands not big enough to grab your dreams,
sad eyes, too much for your age.
I don't come closer, not to frighten you,
but in the breeze that grazes your hair
you will find the caress that I wasn't able to give you.
Chatikona - Dongoria Khond Village
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Floydian
(30970) 2006-03-05 12:47
beautiful portret in beautiful light.
love here eyes and the pose of her hand.
excellent..!!!
devimeuxbe
(58557) 2006-03-05 13:04
Hi Daniela
Wouuu. It's so beautifull !
Beautifull face, niec crop, intensive glance. It's a great picture really.
Congratulations
Bertrand
antho
(412) 2006-03-05 13:20
Very beautiful portrait.
I love the contrast between the roughness of the wood, the dust on her skin and the purity of her eyes.
Maybe i would have preferred it with a little more contrast.
Very nice note too.
Congratulations.
Antho
benkrut
(2407) 2006-03-05 13:26
Amazing portrait.
Her look is very misterious and sad.
Great light and colour.
Is there your shadow deep in her eyes? :)
Take care
HS
sufi
(9588) 2006-03-05 13:26
Hello Daniela;
It's a very impressive portrait and beautiful picture...
TFS..
Stay well..
Salim.
dramaqueen
(208) 2006-03-05 13:32
Beautiful portrait Daniela. No need to say anything else. Thanks for sharing,
Lale
Vexxx
(210) 2006-03-05 15:26
Beatifully framed with really biggest emphasis on those big, sad and longing eyes.
johnhopkins
(866) 2006-03-05 17:09
Beautiful portrait that is nicely composed with nice light and a wonderful expression on her face.
faubry
(35447) 2006-03-05 18:04
wow! superbe regard rêveur! un très beau portrait! avec une lumière éclairant juste où il faut, bravo et merci
directement dans le thène "regards"
francine
jjcordier
(79299) 2006-03-06 1:09
Another great portrait, Daniela. Very expressive!
J'aime beaucoup ce regard empli de tristesse mais peut être aussi de rêve? Quelle force dans cette image!
Best regards
JJ
etiennejr
(1022) 2006-03-06 2:28
What an empty expression, great capture. Gives us to think how good of a life everyone with a camara and internet actually has.
TFS
Etienne
quetzal
(3665) 2006-03-06 12:57
BOnsoir Daniela,
Magnifique portrait !! Il faut dire que cette petite fille est vraiment jolie et qu'elle se prête bien volontiers à cette photo. Le reflet dans ses yeux est extraordinaire !
Bravissimo.
Amicalement.
Jean-Louis
jbweasle
(9393) 2006-03-06 13:42
Hi Daniela, this is a very well composed portrait - off-centre subject, looking into the frame and with her hand to fill the empty space. Lighting is superb to give a warm tone to the skin and also wonderful highlights in her hair. The faraway look in the girls eyes tell us of deep thoughts and possibly troubles. Well captured.
jasmis
(58653) 2006-03-07 4:07
Well, it is really perfect portrait. Is the tittle "Sadness? No? Very well. I am sure your original tittle is much better. Amazing model, impressive note. Really great. Regards, Daniela.
elmec
(12210) 2006-03-07 17:14
Hello Daniela!
That's great portrait!
I like the composition and atmosphere of the musing in girls eyes...
Great done!
Best greetings!
vts_ch
(2624) 2006-03-08 18:20
Hi Daniela,
I like this portrait, rough and tender, in this perfect opposition.
Well done
Vincent
Captain
(514) 2006-03-09 19:43
A wnderfully evocative prortrait of this young girl, well carried out.
everlasting
(19680) 2006-03-10 2:52
Beautiful portrait, such emotion expressed in her eyes. I like the textures and tones of her skin and tree bark and the light works so well.
tinamunk3
(6408) 2006-03-11 10:44
Hi Daniela,
What a fantastic portrait!!!! The expression you have captured here is amazing - this little girl is for sure lost in her thoughts - or has too much on her mind. Fantastic light and colours and I love your tight crop.
Really really nice.
:) Tina
marietom
(34611) 2006-03-12 3:40
UN portrait tout en douceur...
Je continue de visiter ta galerie...
Marie
keribar
(43841) 2006-03-13 15:50
Hello Daniela,
One of the best pictures I found on TE these days. It will be today's surprise for me : I wish I had taken it. It would certainly be in my India Exhibition.
Many thanks - Izzet
KevRyan
(22956) 2006-03-13 17:44
A very nice soulful portrait Daniela - a little too much burn on the hair and shoulders but nevertheless a very nice image which is otherwise both technically and artistically very good. I wonder with the burn whether it might actually look better in B&W - it's a shame because it really is such a nice capture.
best wishes Kev
quillo
(11858) 2006-03-20 6:13
Me ha impresionado mucho esta foto, la tristeza en la mirada de la niña es impactante. Es un reportaje muy bueno y la nota me gusta.
Te felicito Daniela.
Un abrazo.
kinginexile
(2598) 2006-04-04 23:56
Very happy you paid me a visit on my gallery, as I can find out about yours, and it's a joy, with very diverse subjects, which usually comes from the way we look at the world, and how the retina stays near the heart.
I was struck by this one on your first page, and am glad it got its due recognition. A moody portrait, with drama rendered by the strong sunlight in the hair, still leaving the face in the shade, which halps convey the full expression of that cue-less gaze (as I see it)
iGirl
(1223) 2006-05-12 14:31
Hi Daniela, excellent capture of a thoughtful moment! I like your composition and exposure. The reflections in her eyes are great! Thanks for sharing!
Erin
saeedabbasi (298) 2006-09-13 1:02 [Comment]
Albrecht
(11283) 2006-11-23 13:38
Hi Daniela
Lovely portrait and a face that tells a sad story....
Well captured moment in a good picture.
greetings Albrecht
sothy81
(9646) 2006-11-23 13:47
Hi Daniela, this is a great capture of the moment. Good one. It caught my eyes. So I take sometime to play around with it. I hope you like the workshop. Sothy
gmg
(4202) 2006-11-23 13:48
Scatto assolutamente bello per l' inquadratura, l' esposizione, l' espressione della bambina. Tra le mie foto preferite di questo sito, complimenti
gmg
batalay
(41261) 2006-12-27 1:17
Hello Daniella,
This photograph was taken 13 months ago and poste 9 months ago. I discovered it quite by accident. You have done intuitively what the great painters — Leonardo, Rembrandt, and even Picasso — have done in their work. They put one eye on the vertical centerline of the portait.
I wrote a book about Leonardo, and in Chapter 8 I wrote about a principle discovered by Christopher Tyler in 1998. Although in art schools this is never taught, the talented artist focuses on one eye.
Happy New Year,
Bulent
bdayer
(489) 2007-03-25 4:23
Hi Daniela,
Beautiful picture. Excellent framing and colours. The reflection in the little girl eyes gives the impression she's an empty look, staring in the void. Her hand grabing the wall balances well the portrait.
Bellissimo!
Regards,
Bertrand
Charo
(51290) 2007-03-27 11:50
Hola Daniela
Preciosos y expresivos los ojos de esa niña, muy bien captada esa imagen.
Gran POV
Saludos
Charo
ugurbocegi (36) 2007-05-23 6:37
It's an amazing photo with a nice framing. The light on her hair, specially the look in her eyes is very impressive.Thanks.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Daniela Tondella (just4iris)
(792)
- Genre: Mensen
- Medium: Kleur
- Date Taken: 2005-11-30
- Categories: Dagelijks leven
- Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE A200
- Belichting: f/3.5, 1/200 Seconden
- Fotoversie: Originele versie, Workshop
- Thema's: regards, My favorite images of you [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-03-05 12:42
- Favorieten: 8 [Zicht]
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