Living mannequin., a photo from Bali, Nusa Tenggara

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In a windowshop, Kuta.

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devimeuxbe (58557) 2006-09-19 3:38

Bonjour Joel
C'est très beau ce cadrage sérré sur ce beau visage. Cela nous donne une belle sensation de proximité.
Très bon.
Amicalement
Bertrand

akb (212) 2006-09-19 3:39 [Comment]

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indcoup (4) 2006-09-19 3:43

Hi,

Nice shot:
a pretty girl and a blurred background.

Perfect!

Furachan (0) 2006-09-19 3:46

Super ce theme, Joel ainsi que l'execution. Tu retournes enfin aux femmes de Bali (ca t'a pris du temps...) Cadrage au millimetre, rien a redire, une belle image.
Bonne journee,
Francis

luisafonso (862) 2006-09-19 4:22

The composition is very striking Joel, very dynamic. This wouldn’t be the same without that hand placed where it is now. But her look is what really strikes me here. She is indeed very beautiful. Technically, I would love to see a bit more light in her face, but I also love it the way it is. The rest is perfect. Thanks
PS. I've tried a ws to lighten up the face...

[workshop] [compare] +

arjun_das (1851) 2006-09-19 5:35

lovely portrait. i like the diagonal framing. you captured her mood very well too. tfs.

regards,
arjun

thaprem (2566) 2006-09-19 5:53

Joel,
A very sensational imagge this time!..Who is looking at who?!!
She seesm to be in trance, frozen withthe moment, with eyes wshowing a lot of thought & longing...
You have even have the focus on the face sharply, making her a charm multiply!.
Thanks,
Prem.

savask (1891) 2006-09-19 6:46

I would prefer a tighter crop ( without the hand) and more light on the face

Albrecht (11283) 2006-09-19 9:32

Hi Joel
Nice soft portrait with good POV and DOF and clours and use of the natural light.
~Greetings Albrecht~

nastasia (49) 2006-09-19 10:47

Hi Joel,
Very well composed photo!

Anastassia

PeterC (2242) 2006-09-19 10:48

Joel,
A very original idea her stare really does make her look like a model. Very well seen. I really like the tight crop and think it works very well.
Cheers
Peter

lasscor (7640) 2006-09-19 17:49

Bonsoir Joel,
Magnifique portrait, tout en douceur.
Cadrage serré parfait.
Lumière douce, couleurs naturelles.
TFS,
Corinne

dolin (7369) 2006-09-20 15:05

Salut Joel.
Moi, ton portrait, je le trouve super intéressant.
Elle a vu que tu l'as photographiais ou pas ? T'es à quelle focale ?
J'adore son air naturelle et sa tête dans les étoiles, on la sent ailleurs, loin d'ici.
Les doigts sont peut-être un peu trop présent, en plus y a la lumière pile sur eux, mais rien de bien dérangeant....et quand c'est du volé, on peut pas toujours faire des miracles, on prend ce qu'il y a.
Bref, le visage est splendide, cette attitute est vraiment bonne.
Fred