Photographer's Note
A boy jump to Laut Tawar Lake in Takengon City, Central Aceh, Sumatera.
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Tezic
(17867) 2006-08-22 11:43
Hi Hari,
Welcome to TE wit a very nice captured photo...
Light time, your timing and framing are perfect... very nice compo... congratulations...
rgds- coskun
kristies
(451) 2006-08-22 11:49
Hi Hari!
Welcome on TE with a very good first shot. Taken just at the right time!
Good sharpness and composition
Well done
Thank you fore sharing
Greetz Kristies
twofun
(1480) 2006-08-22 11:50
perfect perfect perfect ...
very good composition , color and perspective
t.f.s.
pilpel-adom
(3018) 2006-08-22 11:54
Hey Hari and welcome to TE!
Very nice first post - a moment of pure youth joy! So simple, naive and beautiful! Exposure control and POV is very good, enhancing depth and stopping the motion...
Well done!
Chen
arjun_das
(1851) 2006-08-22 12:20
excellent capture of that joyful boy. the scenic beauty of the place is wonderful too. lighting is very good as well.
best wishes,
arjun
adrost
(2378) 2006-08-22 14:27
Hi Hari.
Amazing compo and revelation of this moment.
Like naked angel !
Funny shot.
Regards
a.
vapours
(8264) 2006-08-22 23:15
A great first photo to enter TE with Hari, the use of the wide angle is perfect here as it presents the full scene around the boy, and the look on his face is priceless. Nice one.
andreng
(265) 2006-08-23 0:00
Hello Hari
Welcome to TE. Just like you I am new to TE. Excellent first shot from you. Good details and nice expression from the boy. Perhaps you can let me know something. I am not sure from the pic where the boy jumped from. Was he on the flat plank or he jumped from the round pole at the end of the platform. Also was this shot taken with a polarizing filter? If that had taken out the reflection from the sea you may have a even better shot.
sabyasachi1212
(19779) 2006-08-23 7:51
Hi Hari,
Wellcome to TE with a nice composition.
This is superb work. Well done!!
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi
ndb1958
(9289) 2006-08-23 14:35
Hi Hari,
welcome on TE with your beautiful shot. This boy makes me smile with his powerful jump into the sea. Creates a feeling about freedom for me. Nice colours.
Waiting for more.
Nino
branley
(3681) 2006-08-24 4:39
Hello Hari,
welcome to TE. This is a well timed image and an excellent first post. Well done.
Regards
Stephen
adeknet (4) 2006-08-28 12:47
hi Guh..
Hmm..,Ekspresi bagus, bagus se x
Tapi..., kapan2,jangan motret anak bugil lagi ya..,ntar akhwat nggak mau lihat foto teguh, haram bo... :)
Vincent_R
(157) 2006-08-29 8:10
Fantastic moment!
Looks like he's flying and loving it!
I like wide-angle shots, this one is almost 3D-like.
Emiel_Skyfreak
(3002) 2006-10-16 19:47
Hi there Hari,
My first though when I saw this one : haha.
The boy's face is so funny, I like that he is really laughing out hard when jumping with arms wide open. The motion blur is also nice. I like how you caught just a little from where he jumps and in the distance a nice background. Maybe a lower point of view (POV) would be slightly better, to just have less water in view. But this is good allready.
Good sharpness and exposure, maybe a bit overexposed sky, but doesn't hurt that much, just a small portion. A polarizer, or more extensive use of it would have reduced the reflection of the bright sky on the water. I think that would have been nicer.
You could also rotate the image slightly clockwise, to get a straigth horizon. Maybe the appearance of the crooked horizon is only due to differences in distance from your POV, but correction of this feeling shouldn't hurt I think.
I read this is the first share, well done :)
Regards from Holland,
Emiel (ps my mum is born in Indonesia :) )
rychousmama
(0) 2006-10-16 21:01
Absolutely beautiful! Wonderful POV, incredible jumping pose of the boy, amazing colors, nice natural lighting, and a perfect composition. This is an excellent photo!
-Lara
bewokedan (35) 2006-11-15 23:00 [Comment]
Mistral
(15416) 2007-01-27 5:17
Selamat pagi, Hari,
excellent dynamic shot with lovely sight of the jumping child. Your composition is very good and you choose a good framing to represent this moment of simple joy!
A smile from Italy
Luca
prasadpaul
(297) 2007-08-09 6:05 [Comment]
teo (259) 2009-03-22 7:08
O_O' WOW !!!
Perfect shot!!! Fantastic pov and fantastic angle! Nice colors!
Good job!
Bravo!
rgds - Matteo
Photo Information
- Copyright: Hari Teguh Patria (tpatria) (64)
- Genre: Plaatsen
- Medium: Kleur
- Date Taken: 2005-05-06
- Categories: Natuur
- Belichting: f/8, 1/125 Seconden
- More Photo Info: view
- Fotoversie: Originele versie
- Thema's: When you dream, there are no rules.. [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-08-22 11:39
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