First Try, a photo from Cebu, Central Visayas

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Geen

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amrinolastname (223) 2004-04-18 3:34

Good idea of framing. I would like to see more roof or no roof at all (sorry, i can't explain that more cleary with english language, but you can see what i mean in my workshop). Hope you dont mind the workshop.

Wellcome

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elihesamian (26149) 2004-04-18 3:52

Wellcom to TE,Paul.
Your composition is nice.But,with a bit cropping the top of the pic ,it could be better.
"amrinolastname"`s workshop is good,but i think that it need to cropping of top,only.therfore,horizon line(the sea)will not shift to center.
Anyway,your shot is lovely & workshop given is very good.
well done.

StephT (155) 2004-04-18 4:05

tres bien vu la transparence du store !

et bien réalisé en plus !

au final une tres belle composition

gaetantgp (1310) 2004-04-18 5:36

Welcome to TE Paul! This is a very nice shot, Ilike the mountains ans the clouds with the differents shades of the sea. I tried a W.S. I hope you'll like it?...Gaétan

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annmed888 (12) 2004-04-18 9:21