The Bride, a photo from Hougang, North East

::: The Bride by dannytoh (267)

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Photographer's Note

Potrait of a friend at her wedding....a traditional ceremony at a temple.

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gaby (19819) 2005-01-05 9:55

I think the first version without cropping is better.
Sorry for my poor english
Gaby

jiekuan (332) 2005-01-05 10:39

I think a tighter cropping on the face will be nicer.

Ning (359) 2005-01-15 22:13

Good candid portrait and DOF.

However the height and width are disproportionate. The tall portraiture mode begs the question: do you want to draw attention to the face or to her neckline?

If you crop about four inches from the bottom, you'll end up with a clear message focusing on her beautiful eyes.