Photographer's Note
Another architecture From Paris ...
Take near musee du Louvre at Rivoli Street
Very massive structure....I love it !
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cool_krishna
(465) 2005-02-08 3:17
Sorry Eyal, this one doest work too well for me. I get the basic idea behind the composition, but there are certain areas which dont work for me.
1. Composition. At the bottom portion we have buses and people chopped. Though I know its v v tough to not have anyone at that busy place..
2 Exposure. The picture is over exposed for my taste. We dont get to see the sky which forms quite a bit of the composition. A little faster shutter or maybe a few stops down we could have made out the color of the sky.
This is not to discourage you. You did a great job taking the diagonal view of this avenue.. which is quite creative. And all these are my suggestions for your next picture to come out super. Cheers and all the best. Sorry if I discouraged you in any sense.
PS: I created a Workshop for you ; but it seems you have disabled Workshops. Incase you would like to view my version, maybe you can enable the feature.
Photo Information
- Copyright: eyal krief (picto5) (62)
- Genre: Plaatsen
- Medium: Kleur
- Date Taken: 2005-01-31
- Categories: Architectuur
- Camera: Canon DRebel (300), 18-35 mm
- Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
- Fotoversie: Originele versie
- Date Submitted: 2005-02-08 1:36
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by picto5, last updated 2005-02-08 07:08