Blue and yellow, a photo from Corse, South

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Blue and yellow, a frontage of building in Bastia.

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chrischris (877) 2003-10-01 7:05

Un sujet simple mais quelle belle composition! Très bien cadré. Les couleurs sont belles, bien contrastées. Ce type de volet se retrouve aussi sur la Côte d'Azur. Très jolie photo, et y a pas à dire... le bleu, le jaune et les encadrements blancs... tout ça va bien ensemble.

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gepall (1838) 2003-10-01 7:51

Very good composition and colour.
It is symmetric and the space is harmonicaly given

Porteplume (4036) 2003-10-01 7:55

Lovely composition and beautiful tones but there is something wrong with the framing, I can't find what has happened?
But still... You are doing better & better Dominique!

Agréable composition et merveilleuses teintes mais quelque chose n'est pas tout à fait réussi dans le cadrage, je me demande où est la faute?
Mais c'est certain, votre travail s'améliore énormément Dominique!

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gary (109) 2003-10-01 8:30

Nice and simple composition. I like the way that it's not completely uniform, in that some of the windows are open and some closed. I've done a WS for my own amusement which straightens the perspective. Hope you like.

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cdewet (0) 2003-10-01 8:55

This is good. The perspective shift is always a problem if one des not have a perspective correction lens, but this does not distract here. However, the shade from the RHS shutters that is not on the picture, shows as small triangles - crop them or erase them. Also, maybe try only 9 windows, uneven numbers gives a stronger impact

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orme (7219) 2003-10-01 9:53

Nice composition. Good soft colours. With regard to the framing, I feel that the middle row is stronger, because these windows are completely 'framed' by the brown wall. The top and bottom rows are only 'framed' on three sides.

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avigur_11 (22553) 2003-10-01 9:57

Very nice subject, Dominique. Great colors, beautiful composition, a lovely pic.
I like they each window opens in a different way.
Well done!

dob_31 (0) 2003-10-01 12:18

Quelle belle photo aux couleurs douces et aux ombres contastantes... Bravo!