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Photographer's Note

Still walking around in the fog where this bench, wet and cold, not seems very attractive.
We hade some snow, but after some warmer days, we are back to foggy autumn days here in Oslo.

Original pic, cropped, slightly adjusted in light/contrast and colour settings.

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snsk (796) 2003-12-05 5:08

veldig fint motiv, skjempe fint :)

carper (96) 2003-12-05 6:03

Jack,

This is a nice picture. I would thank you for your critique. You ask me how big the carp is in my hands. Well it was a carp from 32 englisch pounds.
About your picture, the colours are nice, and I like the fog behind. Well done.

henrye (3500) 2003-12-05 6:29

Nice atmosphere you captured here. I like the space in the photo, the fog in the distance and the textures and colors on the bench.

joseelias (0) 2003-12-05 7:44

Nice mood on this photo. The foggy ambiance is great and so the colors. About the composition I would prefer a tighter crop on the left and bottom to take the bench off the center, and if possible to see a bit more to the right.

emax (920) 2003-12-05 8:50

I thought that in this period, Oslo was covered with the snow? The grass seems like in the springtime. The bench makes a good composition. Is the inscription on the bench have some sense?

Guto (1738) 2003-12-05 8:51

That's a good idea about what to shoot on a cloudy day. I like the atmosphere here. But I agree with Jose Elias: the bench could be off centered, closer to the bottom left corner.

dsidwell (9783) 2003-12-06 2:35

Lovely simplicity. Tonal range is so nice: deep darks and pleasant lights. Composition is very nice. Reach a bit higher and the hill would be between the bench and the forest, and the bench wouldn't cut the scene in half. Very nice photo!

touristdidi (8583) 2004-02-13 8:05