the lonely tree, a photo from Tel Aviv, Tel Aviv

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Geen

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glider (690) 2003-11-25 10:16

Nice contrast (sky and grass), nice tree but position of motorbikes and dusty road devalued composition of this picture.

Welcome to TE.

dob_31 (0) 2003-11-25 11:16

Welcome to TE,

Your first contribution is good, the colors are bold, the tree and sky are nice, but I have to agree with "glider" about the effect of the motorcycles. Personnally, I don't mind the road.

A note would have been nice.

dovi (1068) 2003-11-25 13:28

Welcome to TE! this is a good photo to start with the colors are beautiful, I'd crop the right green area though to balance the photo!

ninadev (5377) 2003-11-25 17:44

Maybe sme mind the motorcycle but I am sure these bikers were happy to find this tree and rest under it's shade. I made a WS to show you how I would crop this picture to put the tree more off centered. There would be varous ways to crop this picture with a great result.

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singuanti (15250) 2004-12-30 20:10

cool tree and composition. I like the feel of loneliness and emptyness.

zilinskyi (493) 2005-11-26 5:48

Nice start Rani. Some remarks:
1) If the tree is the subject get it in focus and get the bikes out of the frame.
2) It can be interesting to includ the bikes then get a much closer shot (or crop) and take the bikes at a more interesting shoting angle.
3) Wellcome to TE!

mottitamir (11) 2006-05-22 13:20

green, brown and blue are grate, but the motorbikes are unclear part.